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Hey, deafwriter! I'm glad I finally got the chance to read some of your stuff. ^_^ This story is cool--you built up the church atmosphere really well, as well as ...

*weeps* No more...Sherry? No more Lacey? How can this be?! *sniff* Well, now that there's no more crack to go 'round, I suppose I should tell you that this was ...

*weeps* 3/4? That's not fair. I love Sherry and Lacey more with each section--they're such great characters, and kind of heartbreaking, in a sense. They're wonderful, and I wouldn't have ...

*thwaps* Kylan . You didn't tell me you posted this! At any rate, you're my fourth red star, so be proud, though I don't think you deserve it for being ...

Hey, Mor! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Quick mod note--before you go crazy posting on the boards, we ask that you keep a two to one ratio of reviews to each ...

Yay! More Sherry. ^_^ I absolutely love the fact that she's transgendered--it seems so wrong and so perfect for her at the same time. It adds to her surreality; we're ...

Hey, clograbby! Basically, I love-love- love this. Your characters are so beautiful and alive--especially Sherry, and even the protagonist. Usually, writers make the protagonist boring if they're up a

Hey, 2write4ALLways! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ I have to say, this was an absolutely beautiful concept for a story. It made me really sad, but at the same time, really ...

Hey, olivia! Welcome to YWS. ^_^ Your narrator sounds quite a bit like Georgia Nicholson--I love those books, even though I'm American and usually not a big fan of "fluffy" ...

Hey again, LRabbit! Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I missed Adie. :wink: Adie's perception of her world is still dead on--she thinks a lot of ...

Hey, Gyr! I'm kind of scatterbrained at the moment, so forgive me if I make less sense than usual. :wink: Yay! More Tannar/Karenna goodness. Karenna is probably one of my ...

Hey again, Gyr! Okay, so, I have to say I love Karenna and Tannar together. They're like brother and sister, except slightly more competitive. :wink: They're great, as are the ...

Gyr! Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but! Here I am now. I don't read fantasy, so I usually don't know what to expect beyond the ...

Woah, bunnie! Hold your horses. :wink: It usually takes a day to get a few critiques, maybe a little longer. Since you're new, it might help to get your name ...

Hey, bunnie_i_am! I know it's been a few days, but welcome to YWS. ^_^ This looks like it's going to be a really interesting story--I know absolutely nothing about dance ...