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Hey Breathless! Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy your time here--make sure you review other peoples' work, but also make sure that you play around and have a lot ...

Hey prettynwerewolf4! Wow, you're super new! Welcome to YWS. Before you get started, make sure you read the rules and review someone else's work. We like to have a ratio ...

Hey Tillychan! Okay, so normally I would bark about the title, but I think it's perfect--even to a person who doesn't speak French/thinks that French sounds pretentious when you use ...

GADSTER. Your first line is so beautiful. I misread it the first time around; I read "there is a prisoner in the mist". And then, "there is a misnomer in ...

Hey, borntoshop! Looks like you're new! That's exciting. ^_^ Just one thing--make sure you post a few more reviews before you post any more of your work. A 2:1 ratio ...

Zehra! Hurrah! Again, I love ASofterWorld, and I love your writing. So this was pretty much a match made in heaven. Like the comics, you have a way of taking ...

Salaam, chica! Major props to Clo and yourself--for an excellent contest and an excellent entry. A Softer World tends to be initially funny and human, but with these odd, blowing ...

Hey, my-mystique-eyes! This kind of reminds me of the story of Jesus in the desert--which is kind of ironic, given the ending, but it fits. It's a cool storyline. Religion ...

Kylannnn! I'm still trying to figure out the title, and if it doesn't hit me in the next hour or two, I will come back and poke you. XD Other ...

Hey again, Vizier! You still have the traditional-verse thing going on, but it was much improved--it's reminiscent of 19th century poets, but completely your own style. Win! Keep on developing ...

Hey, Vizier! You know your way around words--I have to say that your word choice was brilliant, and you're obviously well-read. That's something never to lose sight of as you ...

Hey, tnme22! This was a really interesting idea--social pariahs have been done before, but watching people define themselves is always fascinating. A lesson in psychology, wouldn't you agree? ^_~ It's

Hey, lakegirls! Haha, chick lit novels are totally my guilty pleasure. I'm really excited to see where you go with this, and what new stuff you bring to the genre. ...

"I could see the tables sitting there, just out of my reach. Kinda the way Death feels about Bob Barker. " XD Oh my God, you are my favorite person ...

Hey, Fabien! I have to say that I took a look at this because of the title--it's really intriguing, and definitely a breath of fresh air after a page of ...