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Hi! Salis here with a review! One word to describe this half of the chapter: breaking. Although not too eventful, it felt like every moment of this half had carried ...

Hey! Salis here with another review! Wallace's mind skipping from the thought of executioners coming to take is life to thinking about whay they do in their free time was ...

Hey! Salis here with a review! The descriptions throughout the chapter were on point once again, each one being very impactful. The ones that stood out, though, were those of ...

Hey! Salis here with another review! First things first, to answer you post-chapter questions. I'd say your pacing is great in this chapter. Everything that happens in it is leading ...

Hey! Salis here with another review! Although I was pretty certain Ethan was going to live, it was still stressful to read up to the point where his condition was ...

Hey! Salis here with a review! I take it the events in this take place before those in Agent Rider? I suppose so because Ethan still doesn't have the mechanical ...

Hey!! Salis here with a review! First off, the chapter's title was an excellent choice. And the first sentence was a great one to start a chapter with. If a ...

Hi!! Salis here with a review! I'm not sure I'll even be able to put into words how great this chapter was. People (especially me) need more stories like this. ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! It's a great relief that Mirabelle wasn't taken and Wallace was reunited with her so he could find some comfort amidst the pain the ...

Hello again! Salis here with a review! Some revelations were finally made and I'm very happy about that. Very surprised as well. Needles to say, the beginning of the chapter ...

Hi! Salis here with a review!! The banter between Ethan and Nexus at the beginning of the chapter was great. Considering the stressful things happening lately, it was a nice ...

Hey! Salis here with a review. This was honestly a heartbraking chapter for me. If the last chapter's main theme was panic, this one would undoubtedly be fear. Chapter 15 ...

Hi! Salis here with a review! I wasn't expecting I'd ever get an underground fight in this story but I'm sure as hell glad I did! Asher is definitely a ...

Hey! Salis here with a review! You chose a very fitting name for this chapter because that's exactly what I felt while reading it: panic! Blake has gone through a ...

Hey! Salis here with a review!! In all honesty, this chapter is the best work of fiction I've read in a while. You called it a dark fantasy, but I ...