SakuraFallsSweetly♥

Yikes! I liked that. To be honest, I was expecting it to be like a typical story a girl and boy who are friends and fall in love blah blah ...

I love it hun! Its very...me! You and I have similar writing styles my dear! You have a very unique one, as do many. But we have that one thing ...

Hi there. I loved this so much! It reminds me of when I was watching home and away haha and the kid thought he was cursed because bad things kept ...

Oh my gosh! That was incredibly cute and sweet. I liked it because it's like a perfect example of what all little girls and stuff are like when they are ...

That was good, not great but good. I felt it could have went down better? I don't know maybe that's just me and you have your own style of writing ...

Nice, good structure to your characters. I like Brandon, though he seems dull. But hey, that might just be his style. I just like that he seems down to earth ...

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! I loved it like the rat I never wanted! Lol. The warm breeze blew strongly on my face, making my curly hair swirl around me, forcing down my nostrils ...

Wow. All the only word to descibe that chapeter. It was so unextpected. I really like the twist you gave it, it shows the readers that Jesse is not perfect, ...

Awesome story! I could almost hear the narrators voice in my thoughts, very good technique to have. No grammar problems found to be honest. It was just right. Not too ...

That was way too cute! I absolutely loved it! The charcters are ver unique. Very good imagary and emotion here, which can be very difficult to do. Its so cool! ...

Hello! Well, Here goes. I really liked it. I thought it was very original. However, I do think you could maybe use dialogue? I think there is an artical on ...

Hello! I'm gonna review this now. I like it, but DAMN! I am wishing I could just turn a page and read more! lol. It's very good, and you have ...

Ah! I loved it! It was great and totally cute. I didn't read the first chap so I am guessing I missed something? I like it though it was very ...

I like it! Your style is awesome, very original. Not like, you know, how some people write anything and it's like something everybody has read before?lol But yours is always ...

I liked it. Hm, however I agree that it could use a little more detail on how she felt about losing her best friend? Maybe I'm wrong, we all have ...