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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unlove Letters ♥

    That was very, very creative! I loved it. I loved how in the first poem where you said The status feels wrong..its one of those lines that I think a ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Never existed

    WHOA! Was this based on Twilight New Moon? I was getting a Twilight vibe there. It was SO good! Mind if I show it to my friend? She is obsessed ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    Ahh! That was so good! I have never once thought about doing a dance poem. Such a great idea. man it seems sometimes I am the only one with writers ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Overbid my Romance

    Whoa... now that was deep! You used a very good selection of words here, and the length was impressive! It was sort of confusing...or maybe I am just slow...haha. Either ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: It Ends Tonight

    WOW! Good idea you had there of writing a poem based on song titles! I was going to do that once but it came out really bad so I didn't ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Everything

    Oh My GOSH! I LOVED THAT SO MUCH! It was great! Really great! I give you props. It was really catchy and you rhymed it really well. Just perfect in ...

    Oct 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: :: Rain ::

    This was a very moving read for me. The person who wrote a review below is right, you can really feel the character's emotion. Heartless, heartless, sadly are not we ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Accidental Run-In

    Oh my God that was so cute! I loved this so much! I really like the last part too, the ending paragraph was brilliance! Are you writing more to it> ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Stranger's Kiss

    Well, that was good. It's not that I didn't like it, but it is very different to what I am used to reading. Which is mostly quite a good thing! ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I've Been There Before

    I LOVE this! Cries of battle, cries of pain;Troops wandering through sleet and rain; People stamping their feet in vain;One thing’s for sure: I’ve been there before. I especially liked ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i can't be who im not

    Very nice. Cute, yet really meaningful! I like the bubble thing, good imagery. It was a nice piece I have to say. I think I get it, sorry I am ...

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: For You in Full Blossom

    Aw! I love this! It's so cute! I especially loved the names you used! e.g. Sakura and Cherry. So cool. By any chance might you be an anime fan? I ...

    Oct 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Acrobat Team - temp title - ch.1

    Heya! I know I haven't given you a review in ages, but I have just been busy. So I am free nowadays therefor I can review. I liked this, very ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter One

    hey! Sakura here. you may or may not be familiar with me, but I am a nice reviewer. Simply because I don't look for the faults of one's piece, but ...

    Aug 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forbidden Love; Chapter 1.

    Awesome. I don't know what it is DarkAngel but your work draws me into it. It's just so different. Edgey and dark but I definitely like it. I loved how ...

    Aug 26, 2009


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