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Re: the pit of the madman
Woops!! haha sorry! I can see that now :-)
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Please Just Open the Door All the Way
Thank you!!! Those both really mean a lot to me!
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Verse One
I have no words but one- wow!! That was incredible, I wish I could write like that! Stick with it, you will go far!!
Nov 15, 2013 -
Re: Look past Her
First of all Thank you!! I'm so grateful for feed back! I just wanted to explain the line "I want to think". It means that the narrator has no solid ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Strangers on the Streets
Wow. That was beautiful. You might want you use synonyms for stranger(s). And in the 4th stanza 'pretty young souls'- very young souls? Awesome though!! Keep writing :-)!
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: A Promise, of Sort
Wow! That was really great! I loved the last line! It was sweet, desprete, and hopeful all at once! I think you should change it to you in "The gate ...
Jun 19, 2013