Sageleaf

Hi! This is a very nice poem! I have never been skiing/snowboarding, but this takes me there and makes me feel it. As for corrections, I don't see anything that ...

Wow, this is really nice! You did a great job! Sage

I noticed something about this poem before, put I didn't know quite what until now. This isn't a poem, it's a song! It would make an awesome song! Do you ...

In reply to Nova and Snowberry23. I have never been happy with the rhyme of "gems" and "them". I have thought long and hard about that one, but I can't ...

Sorry guys, I forgot to mention, this is an assignment from my writing teacher. I was supposed to write in a scene where the reader was "zooming in" on something. ...