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Re: The Arc: Chapter1, section 2
Mwahahaha I, SPAuthor, am here to review your piece. Dun-dun-dun. Anyway, so far I've really like your book. It's very interesting. I mean, who doesn't like a book about the ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: It's All in My Head
Hey, SP here to review. I suppose I'll start with the cons. First off, for the most part your grammar is okay, but there are a few mistakes. Here, when ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: 24 - chapter 1
Okie-dokie. SP here to review for ya. Okay, so first off, I would recommend breaking this into more paragraphs. You've broken up the speaking parts right, but when you get ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Why
Okay, so I really like the idea in this story/poem/thingy. How you can hate someone because you love them, or love them because you hate them. The concept is really ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: Third Line Pulse-Chapter 1 (old version)
Alright, so this is my first time doing a review, so I'm sorry if it's not as good as it could be. :) First off, the cons. I think you ...
Apr 17, 2012