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This poem tells of a man named Adam, and his encounter with a woman/man. It is a superb poem which conveys it's message clearly while forcing the reader to think ...

I came here from your first chapter, and you have done it again! This chapter is a bit different from the first chapter, but that does not make it bad. ...

The poem itself is very nice. It could use some improving though: For instance: "If the postman himself, is one of the corruption's slaves!!!" You could have reworded it to ...

The poem has a sort of feel to it, an aura and trust me that is a good thing! It's a bit short, and each section sort of feels like ...