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Ah, see? I'm no good at reviewing poems! Though you're very welcome! :)

You have no idea how helpful you've been! Thank you so much, and I'll make sure to work on those nitpicky. Once again, thanks, you're a great help! :)

Glad you liked it. :)

Gee, thanks! :)

Thank God! I appreciate the helpful review and I'm really glad you liked it. Some of the nitpicks I didn't even realize were that bad until now. I'll fix them ...

Thanks so much! Glad you like it. :)

Gee, thanks! Glad you like it. :)

Thanks for reading! This is actually just a short horror story, so there isn't a second chapter sadly. :( And he main character wasn't exactly a criminal, more of a ...

Read my reply to the comment below. That'll clear things up. :) Thanks for reading and glad you liked it!

Thank you! And no, I probably should've mentioned that the story line itself isn't mine. Though I did edit and add on to it, changed some things too to the ...

I did not read the prologue so thank you for mentioning it! And no problem. Let me know when the next chapter is ready and I'll be happy to review ...

Never in my life have I found something so beautiful, so insightful, so utterly ROFL hilarious. This deserves to be written in script for a parody play. I can just ...

No problem. You're extremely talented! :)

Thank you for your advice! You're actually the first person to review on this chapter. Thanks again! :)

No problem, glad I could help!