Rydia

Hahahaha. I didn't mean go and read it. Lol. It's older than you know actually. I posted it on here not long after joining but it was written a few ...

*Locked for plagiarism*

Oh Jasmine, what would I do without you? Thank you so much, you're always so incredibly helpful! I'd half forgotten about this one actually but I do like the theme ...

*Moved to other poetry.*

I can understand the need to explain things, Heather, but maybe have the characters discuss the scramble zone? I think that would make it easier to digest and it wouldn't ...

This is very well thought out. I love the plot you're working with and your main character has a very good natural voice but I think you need to work ...

There I was, lying on my bed, the dark green blankets and sheets all wrapped around my body. “Ok, Mom.” She always was like this, every single day! “Ok…see you ...

The Party (Version 2) I'm dancing with the Reaper; feet dragging across the floor as he spins me round and round. The crowds part, silent and unobtrusive as the wind ...

Yeah, I noticed the Iambic beat and it was a good attempt but some of the lines were out by a syllable. I can explain how the stresses work actually ...

Awesome Clau! Such a very deep, well wrtten poem. I just know it came from the heart! So does a new post count as a review?

Thanks for the comments everyone, you've all been very helpful!

A friend recommended it to me a few weeks ago actually. Is it worth reading? Does the good outweigh the bad?

This seems a little superfluous. I think that's what the book reviews section is for anyway...

Thank you, that's very encouraging =)

Ah, that helps a little but isn't your work more fan-fiction then?