Rydia

Why hello there! Alright so I like poetry like this which is passionate about helping people and making a difference, it's always very nice to read! It's perhaps a little ...

Heya! First off, I really like the end of this poem and what it builds up to, but I do wish it had gotten there faster. Your beginning was a ...

Hey there! So this is a cute little poem you've got but the grammar needs fixing, really it does! You shouldn't use abbreviations like thru in poetry unless you're making ...

Hello! I haven't read the other reviews so please forgive me for any repetitions but right, let's get started. First off, good, strong title. And I liked that it started ...

I've seen this plot happen in films but never in a poem so bravo for that. It was unexpected and certainly caught my attention. This is good. Admittedly more in ...

Why hello there! Sonnets huh? They're haaaard. I had to write one not so long ago for my poetry class and I really struggled with it. You seem to have ...

Hello my dear! So I like this, I think you have some strong words and images but it's a little over-loaded at the moment so that the reader doesn't know ...

Well hello there, I said I'd read some of your stuff and now here I am. Told you not to hold your breath ;) Now then, I don't usually do ...

Hello there! I just noticed this on my reading list so I figured you asked for a review at some point on one of the competition walls or something. Anyway! ...

Hello there. A series of short poems, hmm? Well they don't really work together or alone and they should have titles! There's some alright ideas here and a few good ...

Hello again! I got a little distracted by some other reviews but here I am now to take a look at this one too :) I didn't find it very ...

Why hello there! First off, I think your title needs work; whether it's the long or short version, it's just not catchy enough. A title is important, it can make ...

Why hello there, sorry about the brief delay on this. But, here I am! Now then, you've made some excellent revisions already, just thought I'd set your mind at rest ...

Hey there! I'm going to give you a few comments for the first poem as I think with the second you've taken some good advice but not done it justice. ...

Hey, hey! Alright so I'm a little conflicted over this one. On the one side, I love your tone and the content behind it is great; there's a wonderful story ...