Rydia

Howdy there oh team-mate of mine! I thought I'd drop by and review your lovely poem. First, a line-by-line :) He's got eyes like the sky. Yet so cold and ...

Hi there, team-mate! I am here to give you a review :) Alright so I have a few comments for you. Since I haven't read the earlier parts, I'm going ...

Hai hai, here I am as requested :) So I shall make comments as I read through and try not to be too confusing. My first point is nicely done ...

Hello there! You don't seem to have many reviews so I thought I'd come along and help you out. Let's see. I like this, something about it, though it may ...

Oh I love zombie films! My first advice, before reading this though is to organise it like a script. The name of each speaker should be aligned on the left ...

Hello there, I shall be your reviewer today! Alright so when I read your first two lines I was a little dubious as we've all heard the cliche and you ...

Hello my dear! Some line-by-line comments first... hush, now, here come the inklings! [This could be more dramatic just by changing your word choice up a little. Hush is a ...

Hi, just a few general tips on poetry since Demsi seems to have given you some specific comments! Old Poetry Okay so by this I mean poetry that's written in ...

Hi! This is a very nice poem, lovely sentiments and a great conclusion but I think your lines could flow a little more smoothly in places. Shall we take a ...

Alright so another excellent chapter, but you're at least a little right about the action scene. It doesn't feel all that actiony and I didn't get much of an idea ...

Hello my dear! I believe I promised you a nice, shiny review before the month is out and since the month is almost out, here you go... Or at least ...

Hi, hi! Time for chapter four then :) “Fine,” he grumbled, “five pieces of silver.” I was in no mood to argue so passed over the coins. He had a ...

Okay so I don't normally review fan-fic but I love X-Men (and Gambit

I have to agree with Snoink, the author commentary was really great and added another level of humour to the piece! I too would have liked to see more of ...

Hai! This is very nice. I don't actually have that many comments for you but as they say, every little helps so here you go: You had me with, two ...