Rydia

Hai! Okay so I like the poem you have here, but I think it might have been more interesting to present it as a guessing game. Like, because of your ...

Hi there! Line-By-Line Forgotten, sat he deep within earth’s darkest womb

Hi there! I shall be your reviewer today :D First, a suggestion for your title! I think it's strange that you used the plural since this is about someone with ...

Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this but hopefully the review will have been worth the wait :D Specifics 1. I remember the day it happened ...

Hi! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this but let me see... General Notes 1. Good, dramatic first line. Very nice. 2. Over-doing it just a little ...

Hi again! :D I'm going to work more with giving you general tips, rather than specific ones again because there's too much that needs proof-reading here for it to be ...

Oh look, I'm here to review! :D Jackson always had weird dreams; dreams that made absolutely made no sense. Like the time he dreamed he was Spongebob, doing the chicken ...

Why hello again! The Dream Sequence A lot of missed opportunities here! You write the dream as you do your standard prose so that if I were to come to ...

Hai! Okay so time to start :D I'll probably only do the one section today but shall hit the next one shortly ^^ I had the same dream. We were ...

Hi! Okay so short and sweet but I think some of your images could be stronger here and it feels just a litle lik you're writin the poem for the ...

Hello my dear! Now let me see... ‘The shadows seem to like you,’ I said thoughtfully. I just wanted to say that I really loved this line of dialogue. Excellent ...

Hi! Lyrics, yum yum. Okay so you could do with a few more verses in there as this is really short right now, but let's see if I can give ...

I saw this a while ago and wasn't really paying attention to what forum it was in, so I thought you wanted a favor and 'sure' went through my head. ...

Hi! Sorry its taken me a while to start on these but hopefully I'll get the next one to youu more quickly ^^ Annaria starred at her hands while she ...

Ky has the truth of it! Sorry about the confusion guys but as Kyllorac says, there was most likely a spammer who posted links to their jewelery store by the ...