Rydia

It's fine. I'll run out of chapters soon and then I'll have to go and do something else. Or maybe I'll feel able to leave when my team finally takes ...

This is why I should stay away from YWS on review days. Or most days, but especially review days... Specifics 1. Of course she isn't surprised he's from Earth, he ...

Either I'm far too competitive when it comes to review day, or I really like your writing! Let's go with the latter ;) Specifics 1. Doesn't he wish that he'd ...

One more... Specifics 1. Is he sinking further in or just stuck? Does he have to kick his feet in the water to stay above the surface, or can he ...

Okay I lied, my team need more points. Specifics 1. Can Christian really tell the garden gnomes apart? I have trouble recognising a person I've only met once or twice, ...

Look what I found... this is probably going to be my last review, but I figure I'll be more useful reviewing something continuous, even if I have done it out ...

Hello again! I liked the other section enough to take a look at some more, though I think this happens before then? I'll try not to be confused... Specifics 1. ...

Hello! I haven't read the other chapters so please take anything I say with a pinch of salt. If you feel like you've covered something I'm confused about in an ...

Hi BlueAfrica! Please bear in mind that I haven't read the earlier sections so you'll have to apply your own judgement to my review and if you think you've covered ...

Hi! An interesting idea you have here and I'm a big fan of palindromes to tell you the truth, though this isn't actually one. A palindrome is actually a word ...

Doctor Who themed poetry! Excuse me while I go squeal about this... ahem. Alright, let's take a closer look! Specifics 1. For starters, I'd like to say, That I only ...

Mostly when I'm looking for something to review and I come across a poem I like, I leave it alone. I'm not sure if that's good practice, but I hate ...

Hello! I have this on my very dusty review list so at some point either you asked me to take a look or I saw it and wanted to write ...

Hello! I'm here to review the second one :) I like this better than the other - the flow is much stronger and it has a great rhythm to back ...

Hello! I've not read the earlier parts so if I point out anything which you think you've already covered in a previous section, you'll need to use your superior knowledge ...