Rydia

Next chapter! I think I'll probably get 2/3 more in before I have to head off, though I may have a quick check to see if there's any poetry in ...

Hello again! So I finally have more time for reviews and it's time to start catching up :) Specifics 1. “Perhaps I had get back to bed,” Kiernan says. “It ...

Hi Danni! I have a few hours free today so I'm ready to review this :) Specifics 1. Katie nodded and returned to peeling potatoes. Sometimes she wondered what went ...

Okay so actually I'm a sucker for stories about twins so it's going to be this one first! Specifics 1. The plural of sisters suggests that Loki has two twin ...

Oh dear, it looks like the team could use a few more points ^^ Specifics 1. I could feel a bruise developing where Nyx had punched me as Laryn lead ...

Okay,I should write at least one more before review day ends... Specifics 1. I'm not sure about using the possessive form of apostrophe in 'it's'. I've been brought up to ...

It seems I have a few chapters to catch up on :) Specifics 1. This chapter is very dialogue heavy and could use a few more lines of description to ...

Final chapter, then time for a break! I didn't even realise that last one was still in the green room as well. But yay, I get to review something I ...

Maybe if I'm quick, that other chapter will still be in the green room. But when am I ever quick? :p Specifics 1. In the movies, when someone dies, there ...

Specifics I'm in two minds about subscribing to the club because I quite like that right now I have a few chapters to tackle but I reckon if I hadn't ...

So it seems I have some catching up to do! :) Specifics 1. I love Kiernan's mentality that someone selling a bike clearly didn't want to keep it but I'm ...

Hi! Sorry this has taken me so long, this month has proved far busier than I expected! Specifics 1. Maia didn't hesitate and quickly followed. She sped round corners, leapt ...

Hi! Specifics 1. His smile was more beautiful than a thousand butterflies So we're past tense which tells us immediately that something went wrong here/ most likely the boy died. ...

Hi! So I like simple titles a lot sometimes, especially when they're a household object or something that you wouldn't normally think to write a poem about and The Gate ...

Specifics 1. I really like the first two lines and the double suggestion of him dying on top in the physical way but also mentally, as I'm sure it's emotionally ...