Rydia

So I still owe you give reviews this month and there's less than a week left but it's review day so I think we're okay... Specifics 1. I feel like ...

Hi, sorry it's been a while but finally back to look at the next chapter! Specifics 1. When I woke up, I was in a portable prison cell. The only ...

Hey there! Okay so I'm used to being able to copy the lines of a poem so this may take me a little longer than usual! Specifics 1. I like ...

Specifics 1. The streets, too, were barren without any signs of life. This is a little clunky and could easily be stripped back to something like 'The streets, too, were ...

Hey there shipmate! Specifics 1. The calm and control he had over his mind slipped and some emotions of his carefully shielded emotions dripped through. Probably a typo but I ...

Hello! I had a look at a few of the poems and I chose this one because I think it's better than most of your others and is definitely the ...

Okay, last section for now, then I should review something in the Green Room/ get back to Feltrix' novel :) Specifics 1. Oh God, this was not going to end ...

Specifics 1. The impossibility of cobbling together enough fuel for an entire ‘Space Team’ had kickstarted a rather more earnest search for renewable energy than had been taking place up ...

Specifics 1. But Oran wasn’t finished. “And look at that one!” - pointing a finger coated in baby fat at Kernik - “It has one-two-three-four-five-seven-six-eight legs! And for such a ...

Hi Again! Specifics 1. Margo wasn’t sure if Chip was trying to placate the Bug Division. She hoped not. Not that she wasn’t worried about their discontent, but she didn’t ...

Hullo again! Specifics 1. A young priest took his place behind the podium at the front of the room, smiling at the crowd. It was a good turnout, maybe even ...

Hello fellow Knight! I seem to recall reading a chapter of this before - I think it might have been the first one? Specifics 1. “I guess,” Edna said gloomily. ...

Hello fellow Knight! I'm going to start with some general observations as I read through and then I'll give overall thoughts at the end. I could do it the other ...

Hi! Thought I'd drop by to review this :) Specifics 1. The first stanza is a little cliche and perhaps it's supposed to be but I think it could be ...

Hello again! I realise I'm leaving it a little late in the month to fulfill our bargainbutI do so love to live on the edge like that :) Specifics 1. ...