Rydia

Hello again! I must say, your poetry's quite to my liking. It does vary a little though. There are some parts of this which I really love and others that ...

Hey there. I really enjoyed this, you've got some great imagery and there's some awesome lines. I've not got many suggestions in all honesty but here you go: She lurks ...

Hey hey! You shall have my first review of the day :) You find sadness in the drunken man, who is asleep in the street, yet he finds his happiness, ...

Well I'm not sure that tearing it to pieces is in order but a little surgery might be XD Here's some comments and advice then, I hope it helps: Abracadabra ...

Hey hey! Here I am then :) Let's see what changes you've made... Since I missed the intro when I critiqued the other one, I'll give you a review of ...

Hey there. I regret that it took me so long to get around to this, particularly after having read it. You have a wonderful poem here. I found it started ...

Dialogue Hey hey! Okay so first off, Yorkshire dialect? What an interesting idea! A very good choice as it's one of those accents that's neither modern or old and sometimes ...

A few specifics first and then some more general comments: Adèle Dupont cried at her father’s funeral. Surrounded by her uncle and cousins, she sat in the front row of ...

Opening Okay so I loved what you have with the opening but then it made the scene that followed so much less dramatic. I wasn't surprised, I had nothing to ...

Ah, how I've missed peeling back the layers of your poetry my love. This was great. I love the immediately strong tone of your persona and the fading out to ...

Hello my darling ^^ I like a lot of what you have here but I wish it was slightly less vague. There are some gorgeous lines, strong imagery and every ...

Ooooh, poetry. Yum. You always make me feel inferior and awe inspired, my friend. Demeter to Persephone I can't resist this one, Persephone is such an interesting character to write ...

Hey Eli! I take it I'm looking at an edited version? Okay, well I've only skim read the other reviews so forgive me if anything is repeated. take me out ...

Heeeey. I know, I suck right? Sorry it took me so long to get around to this but I'll try to make up for being useless XD I liiiike it ...

Hey Ben! I've been meaning to give you a few comments on this for a while so here goes... "Shakin' Hands" is the title of a fairly explicit Nickelback song ...