Rydia

Hello my dear! Apologies for the delay on this, it appears I got distracted. You've an interesting piece here, though I must admit to being disapointed by the ending. It ...

Hey 'Rina, loving the header! - How does it look in your browser? It looks good, very bloggish and the attention slides nicely down from the header to the latest ...

Ah this is a little flat. There's some nice imagery but the flow isn't quite there somehow. Maybe it's your beat or... it just doesn't quite have that da dum ...

You seem to be lacking in reviews and that simply won't do. I liked this. I wasn't amazed or over-whelmed I'll admit but there's a certain charm to it and ...

Hey there! Love poetry huh? Well that's as good a place to start as any but it's one of the harder types of poetry. There's a lot that's already been ...

Hey there! I love the sounds of this and there's such a strong, primal feel to it. Or at least there was for me. That Latin, the earthy imagery. Very ...

I'll be honest and say I didn't love this piece but I did find it intriguing and I think there's potential. Made me think of Salome by Carol Ann Duffy. ...

Thank God for Science? That would be a more concise and more intertwined title while staying with the same themes ^^ The skin, lackluster, is stretched taut Green turning yellow, ...

Heya! Sorry about the delay on this, I expected to have more time yesterday but got distracted XD I like this. There's some stuff that I'm not quite sure about ...

Hey hun, looks like I found something all on my own :p Lofty, you peer down at me. You are cocooned in waxy orange skin, [I don't like the repetition ...

A poem like this begs more than a quick read through and I'd happily read it a second time, it was very well put together. There were parts I could ...

I love the title and the concept for this! The poem didn't quite live up to my expectations but there's certainly potential here. I agree with a lot of what ...

Hey there! I don't think the repetition worked too well for you here, it stunted the growth of your poem. I felt that you could have said more in a ...

Hey there! Ah, that makes more sense. I thought you might have spelled loop wrong or something. Maybe Lupine would be more recogniseable as a title? This doesn't feel much ...

Hey hey! An intriguing little poem you have here. I'm not sure how I feel about the lack of normal punctuation and some of your line breaks felt off to ...