Ruthie

Hello :) Nice poem! Some improvements I think would be nice are: - It needs more of a sense of rhythm, which you could do with the syllables of the ...

This is really cool!I like how the person is wasting time and she doesnt even know it. I can relate to that. . . . I also like the ending. ...

This is a review! It was a really cool start! I loved the imagery that you used, and how your writing flowed so well. Your characters are cool, and I ...

Here is my first review..... I really enjoyed listening to you singing this song, and readingit. It was very sad and left me impressed. I liked the way you used ...