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Oh and just a fyi I had the voices italicized but it didn't show for some reason. >.

Hi, thank you this was very helpful! Don't forget to "like" it.

Hiya Despondence, thanks for the review. I was writing this rather rapidly so I guess I didn't think very much on this. And, thanks!

Thanks.

Thank you. I am glad you liked it.

Thanks. :)

Hello. Yes, I see what you mean. It is a bit strained but all my poems seem to be that why. Maybe it's a style I have leaned into. Poems ...

I thought that much. xD

:D

Okay, I will review that asap.

You're welcome.

You're welcome. :)

You're very welcome. :D

I know, I was just trying to be sarcastic. XD

Hello Morrigan! I thought this was awesome! And the feel, oh my goodness overwhelming! I don't have any corrections just why not make it longer? You could add a bit ...