RubyRed

Thank you very much. I hope to write more.

Hey Gorgeous! Thanks for your review this is very helpful to me. I will slip in some more description and add more details to my short story. Enjoy the rest ...

Hey don't forget to "like" it! :D

Don't forget to "like" it.

Don't forget to "like" it! :D

Hey and don't forget to "like" it. :D

This chapter I warn you does not match up with the first one. I will change this to fit the first ASAP.

Hello guys, I have changed this quite a bit so the story would be more interesting and easy to follow.

Lol >.<

Thanks again this really helps!

Thanks!!! :D

Thanks. Remember to click the like button! :D

I made some changes I hope it looks better now. :)

Hey thank you so much I really found your review helpful and yes, I think I could add some more description. :D

Okay, I mended the mistakes.