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Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)
Hello, yizhongt. Thanks for requesting a review! I'm not much into things like this because I find them to be rather confusing to follow and such but I actually liked ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Elysium - Prologue
Hello, Elesium. Thanks for requesting a review. I will try my best to help you in every way I can. First off this was actually really cool. AT the beginning ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: If Every Creature Ceased to Know Their Worth
Hello, InfiniteRectangles! Thanks for requesting a review. I hope you find this helpful. I really, really loved this! I do have some nitpicks for you though. I know, one can ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 6, The Name Game
Hello, BlackhawkUnder. Again I really don't have anything to say as far as corrections and such. I believe your story is taking a great turn. I really, really enjoyed reading ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 5, The Name Game
Hello, BlackhawkUnder. It's me again! First let me ask you the question: WHY DOESN'T THIS HAVE MORE LIKES?! I loved it! It was very interesting and I didn't find any ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 4, The Name Game
Hello, BlackHawkUnder. You requested a review from me. Let me first apologize for the late review I've had some many requests recently and school has been a pain in the ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter Two
Hey it's me again, Ellstar. I have to say I was really excited about this chapter but when I finished it I wasn't at all interested at reading anymore. I ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Divine Intervention: Chapter One
Hello, Ellstar. You requested a review from me a while ago. Let me first off apologize for the late review I have had eight review requests in the past few ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Alone
Hey, Sarah12. It's me Keep. Just came to drop a review. I was actually going to review "Tenebrous Betrayal" but I decided to start at the top of your poems. ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: tick tock
This almost reminded me of Five Nights At Freddy's. I did like it. I wouldn't call it a poem but hey so many people would disagree with me and say ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: How To Write A Book
Haha, I don't know about anyone else here but this made me laugh. I can relate to this so much. I was thinking you should put: "Get half way into ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: Dandruff
Hello, Hadj. This was really funny! My dad has bad dandruff, and although I don't think of it like this children do. I find it to much like a child. ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: The Winged - 01. Delivery Boy Nik (New)
Hey, Wolf. I'm here for the review you requested. I actually liked this. It was interested and it got my attention. There are some things, in my opinion, that need ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: Dear Mother
All I want to say is, "It is NOT your fault. It will NEVER be your fault. What happened to you is inexcusable. No one should ever be put through ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: The Keeper (Dialogue)
Hello, PancakeandWaffle. Again a nice poem from you. I didn't understand very well what this was about but it was fun to read and I found it amusing. I can't ...
Mar 30, 2016
