Ruby68

If I hadn't known before I read it, I never would've noticed you didn't use I. This was very well written! It's definitely a concept that I haven't heard much ...

First off, congratulations for getting in spotlight! I really liked this poem. For me it seemed sad, in a way. The imagery of the sun drying your character's tears is ...

Wow! Really good! I liked this even more than the first part! Just a few minor things. This sentence: "All talk instantly seized, and everyone stared raptly at her." I ...

I really like this story! You have great details and emotions. Just a couple of things. These sentences: "At least I think it's a wall. There is no way of ...

I really like your idea, it's very original. There were some things I noticed that could be changed, but other than that I really liked it. For starters the sentence ...

Wow, this is a really emotional piece. I enjoyed it a lot. I like how you never say exactly what happened. The reader is left with a lot of unanswered ...

I really liked this! I especially liked the ending, it just seemed to tie everything together in a neat little bow and say "the end." I really enjoyed the whole ...

Good job! It's really hard to portray animals with human emotions and having human conversations while still keeping their animal qualities. The body language of the birds is really well ...