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Re: To My Future Niece
Storm, your review made me cry a little thank you so much!!! More poetry to come
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: And So On
Life's is supposed to be possessive, but thank you so much for the tips!! I'll get right on adding some details and re-wording that first sentence. Thank you for the ...
Nov 11, 2014 -
Re: To My Future Niece
I completely agree, thank your for your comprehensive dedication to this review! Hope to hear more delectable wisdom from you soon.
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: To My Future Niece
Wow, thank you so much! That means so much to me, you have no idea.
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: The Quest
Thank you!!
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: The Quest
You are exactly right! Glad you liked it, thank you for reading.
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Violins
Okay. The thing about villanelles is that every first line and last line of a stanza has the same rhyme scheme and every middle line has the same rhyme scheme. ...
Aug 9, 2014 -
Re: Violins
This poem is called a villanelle. It's a form of poetry popular in the nineteenth century, consisting of 19 lines with two repeating refrains that come together to form a ...
Aug 9, 2014 -
Re: For Everly: Chapter 5: Wendy
Gran is Granma Jane. Great Gran is Wendy. thanks for the suggestions on the sentences! I have a habit of writing too many complex sentences in a row, so I'll ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Verita Fetcher: Prologue: The Bearer of Truth
Thank you so much Wolfare! You're right, I didn't see the ambiguity in that sentence. I'll fix that straight away! And yes, you're right, the narrator is an omniscient something ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: .
Don't let them get you down, Gaurav. You and SportyWriter have a gift for satire, and I'm sorry to see you guys leave us. But don't stop writing, okay? You ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: no
Oh, sorry, Blackwood. I didn't mean to crush your very legitimate opinion. Carry on.
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: no
be careful, you might get some people who think you're not kidding :P hehehe
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: no
I'm usually not one for satire, but this made me grin. Way to throw every anti-gay argument up into the air and fire at them with bullets of awesome humor.
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: For Everly: Chapter 5: Wendy
Thank you so much dear! "We idling," was a typo :) I meant to type "wielding." I can't get the i before e except after c rule down. See you ...
Aug 1, 2014
