RoyalHighness

Much, much better! Drake is still a little flat, but better. It's not a major thing. I really really like this idea! Keep going; you've got me hooked!

You're 100% welcome! I hope I didn't come off too harsh, because I really did like it. :D

Do not apologize for art! This was the opposite of disappointing. Hakuna matata, my friend.

I adore this. So, so much. No criticisms. Nothing. Just. Five stars of five. Beautiful.

Thank you! I made some changes according to what you said, because you're pretty right. And yes, over the summer I was learning Sign Language, and my neighbor took me ...

Noted. As I was writing this, I also thought it was very beige-colored, but I wasn't sure how to fix it. I'll try some more poems in this style with ...

Thank you! Yeah, my iPad is terrible when it comes to typing this stuff out. I really appreciate your time. Keep an eye out for the next chapter!

Ohhh okay, brilliantly done, then! That's how I am a lot of the time :P great poem!!

Thank you!

I have read Stargirl and I love that book! It's been so long...perhaps I should read it again...

Wow, thank you for going to all that trouble! I'm glad you like it!

Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Yeah, I've gotten the same comment from a few friends...I'll have to work on that. One friend suggested writing a prequel, in which ...

And now it all comes together. The bolded words. The dismissed desires. Now I understand. And it was beautiful. A standing ovation for the amazing work you've done.

Sorry guys about the spacing! Something glitched while I was editing it, and now I can't fix the spacing. >.< technology hates me. ~ Snitch

Thank you SO much! I really appreciate the thought you put into this review. I'll get straight to work!