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Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 10: The King, The Queen, and...Juno!?
I fixed the abbreviations. I just left one for emphasis. Hope that helps!
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 10: The King, The Queen, and...Juno!?
You sweetheart!
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 10: The King, The Queen, and...Juno!?
Thanks Deanie! You know, I think you're right about the TBWTN thing. It's getting to be a pain to type every time. Stay tuned for more Frey and Adrian action ...
Jun 10, 2014 -
Re: Pink triangles.
*thundrous applause* *standing ovation*
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure
Oh my dear, you've missed an important bit! Juno, Frey and Asteria are triplets. That's how they're in the same class. Arinna is their little sister, who is nine, and ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure
Thank you thank you thank you!!! :D
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Could there be an us?
That's really true. I've actually come to prefer harsh reviews to wishy-washy ones, but it takes a while to get there.
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Could there be an us?
Oh, here it is! Read it if you like; let it be an example unto you that you should never let anything you think is bad embarrass you. Even an ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Could there be an us?
Allow me to direct you to a particularly terrible work I posted that got torn to bits. I was ashamed, I actually cried because the reviews upset me so badly ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure
Thank you for that note on the prison-esque mistake thing because I wasn't sure which preposition to use! The "I think I'm in love," without an exclamation point is actually ...
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure
Thank you!
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Nine: Adrian Kingston and Frey's Fatal Failure
Thank you for the review! I made a few changes, added a few things to slow down the pace and liven up the narrative a bit. Hope it helps!
Jun 1, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Eight: Juno's First Day
I actually didn't think about the Braille syllabi...That's a really good point! I guess I wasn't paying attention, but I don't know how I can reverse it since Juno really ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter Eight: Juno's First Day
Thanks for those nitpicks! I really need some more of those. I didn't let Juno realize Ben James TBWTN was in the elevator until Emma started talking to him, because ...
May 26, 2014 -
Re: My First Poem
Wow. You have a gift! Welcome to YWS, my friend. If you need anything reviewing, any story ideas, any points, any gifts, or just a shoulder to bury your face ...
May 26, 2014
