RoyalHighness

Hmmm. When is the final draft due? Maybe you need to let this marinate a little.

I'll be honest, I didn't get it at the first read-through but I got it immediately on the second. You started off letting us see the birds, and birds for ...

Great job! Quiet and powerful.

Hey thank you for taking the time to read and review, I know this piece was long and you are kind in your analysis! As it happens, I did take ...

Hey, thank you for taking the time to write this review! The seeping line is intentional but if it reads weird, I can change it. The Bible references were also ...

Thank you!! I did notice the stanza issue; I think I fixed it but let me know if there's more that needs to be done. I know the site messes ...

Thank you fortis!! I agree, I think the weak stanza is a little out of place and I could quite fit the tumblr tag thing in there in a way ...

Thank you so much! I never thought of that interpretation. I originally meant for the poem to illustrate how the shadows of leaves come together when the wind blows, and ...

Thank you so much!

I made the corrections you suggested; what do you think now? I was playing around with that structure before, but I didn't know which I preferred. Thanks for the review!

Wow, thank you so much! Happy review day!

Thank you, I appreciate that. And I'm sorry if I overreacted; I know you meant well. Today's a new day, so we can start afresh.

Thank you, but usually in times of tragedy on this site, we don't /really/ review works that are written about them. This is a time for discussion and validation of ...

I edited it! I'm gonna keep working on it; this is just the preliminary editing.

Hey, thank you so much for this review! Long reviews are the best! I'm definitely going to work on the imagery here, but I might have some trouble. Would you ...