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Re: The Fog
This was too beautiful for words, let me just say that right off the bat. The only thing I would change is that you kind of lapse into repetition somewhere ...
Jul 7, 2013 -
Re: Screaming Silence
I loved this, first of all. And to avoid mindless praise, I'll tell you exactly why. I had a friend in 8th grade who cut himself and I could never ...
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: The Little Girl Inside of Me
It was a little choppy for me. The sentences and thoughts didn't really flow. While there is no lack of emotion, it seems a little withheld. I've read similar posts ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Society's The Death Of Me
I love the title. Is it a reference to Phineas and Ferb? That's what I thought of. Your spelling is just a little off in three little places: 1. Society's ...
Jul 4, 2013 -
Re: Twilight's Adventure
You may want to look over your formatting. The dialogue is written incorrectly. Instead of, "It's for a quest from Princess Celestia!" Says Twilight very loud. "For Princess celestia?! Your ...
Jul 4, 2013