RowMahBoat

Good story! I think it's a good example of the problem with homosexuals and how many people see being gay as a problem. The story is very well written, but ...

Thanks for the review! I do intend to continue this story, and thanks for telling me about the punctuation errors. I'll try to fix them next chapter (dun dun dun). ...

Wow, lot of emotions in the story. Good writing and the ending sentence was just begging for a sequel. Just little problems. There were some run-on sentences and a few ...

CHOCOLATE! CHOCOLATE! CHOCOLAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!! -Spongebob Reference But besides that, nice rhyming and good choice of words. Almost made me want to eat my computer....Almost...

oh no! not a test! i didn't study! well, at least it's not an exam! :P