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This is quite a good, well done, fascinating work of art, with a bit of tweaking, you can turn this into a masterpiece.

This is a pretty good, well done, fascinating story, and the map is a nice addition. There are a few disjointed sentences here and there, but with a little touch-up ...

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This was fantastic. Your writing style is captivating. You have a solid grasp of the English language. What I found most impressive about this piece is how smoothly the story ...

First things first, what is a NYX? Maybe you should use something that people can relate with, something familiar, like a cat or a dog. That's just my opinion. Other ...

This is really interesting. I love the dialgoue portions. You write pretty well. It's easy to read your work. Well done.

This is really interesting. I love the dialgoue portions. You write pretty well. It's easy to read your work. Well done.

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For some some reason my comments are being repeated.

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I actually thought you wrote this, and was about to shower you with praises. The English bible is very well written. Wish I could write like that. I think I ...

I had just escaped from the mad house where disgustingly patronizing snobs in white gowns assured me that I was going crazy that I had lost it, that I had ...