RossLighting

Hi Charlotte! Here's my review! It was a pretty good story overall, I felt it could of been a little longer, I get that it Is a short story, but ...

This was a really good part of the story. I liked the realism in it. Like, in real life, storms and 'wife waiting at home while wondering if he was ...

Whoa. This was really dark and serious. But that's what I think you were trying to do. It has a realism perspective to it, and many good adverbs. I really ...

This was amazing. Well written, with good use of onomatopoeia(I think please correct me if i'm wrong, hopefully not). I liked the sentence: The endless cycle begins again. For me, ...

I thought it was amazing. I liked how it progressed in years, and the realism of it all. These things normal children sometimes do, and I feel it fits perfectly ...

This was a really good poem, maybe a bit long but that doesn't matter really, it was a sweet thing to read and seemed to focus on parts of the ...

WOW. THIS WAS AMAZING. I just could not stop reading this masterpiece. It rhymed, it had amazing punctuation, with great uses of words such as 'naught' and 'preach' This poem ...

Wow, this was a really good poem. I liked how it ended with a word to lead it on to the next sentence, a good idea which more people should ...

This was a really sweet poem. I loved it! It was smooth, and fitted together, and was nicely done. How did you come up with this? It didn't rhyme, but ...