RossLighting

Hey, it's RossLighting here, time to review :) First of all, I know people who have panic attacks. It's horrible to see them in such pain and suffering. I also ...

Hey, it's RossLighting, here to do a review :) First of all, even though I haven't read the prologue, the intro sucked me in. I enjoyed the style of writing, ...

Hi, it's RossLighting, here to do a review :) Firstly, the poem was a good length and I thought it was a good topic to talk about. Is this from ...

Hi, i'm RossLighting here to do a review :) First of all, I'd never seen one of these 'prose poems' before, so this was all new to me, a new ...

Hi, MrsxCreepyPasta! Time to review your short script! Firstly, in the opening paragraph, you made many questions. Also, may I suggest you use more imagery. Also, you will need to ...

Well, skylnn, hi, and you asked for me to be brutally honest. I'm not normally brutally honest, I'm literally never. I'm too nice. So you wanted it to be brutal, ...

Cool poem. I thought it was a bit too long, and I didn't understand the word 'xenagogue'. Quite surprised you found a rhyming word for that, that was cool. The ...

Great poem, I loved the human imagery used in the poem. Like the part, 'it screams, it shouts.' I loved that part, and I loved how the whole poem rhymed. ...

First of all, LOVE the starting quote from the beginning. Its always nice and rare to see a quote In the beginning of poems, and this was perfect. I never ...

Wow. Some really powerful stuff. You really seem to care about the Vietnam war, I can tell by the passionate poem. I found the part 'They got nothing of which ...

Hey Remembrance! I really liked this poem! The wording, the rhetorical questions, the hidden meaning of the story, it was great. It was quite short, but that was fine, and ...

Hey Royevans! The poem started off well, and with a good start means the poem should be just as good, and it was, good use of words, and I love ...

Hey anngelalu! Firstly, the poem was short and sweet, with great use of words, which I really enjoyed reading and I think the last part of not being able to ...

Hey Ryleigh! First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm Ross, and I'm going to review your poem. I think this is your first story review on this website? Anyway though, ...

Hey AwkwardMeerkat! Time for a review! Firstly, loved the chapter, though it did get a bit confusing at the end. (I'm really sorry I haven't read chapter 1) I was ...