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Re: thankful for y♡u
thank you but that is all a style choice grammar is needed for stories but not poetry :3
Nov 13, 2017 -
Re: Dear mama...
Hey VegasLights! I'm not here to review, but more to give my opinion truly. On this piece, I read it and though "I know exactly how this person feels". My ...
Nov 3, 2017 -
Re: scarlet blossoms with velvet thorns
capitalization is a style choice but thank you
Sep 21, 2017 -
Re: Just a Star
such beauty much wow
Sep 13, 2017 -
Re: here's to
this is so powerful... wow
Sep 5, 2017 -
Re: eating bubbles
awhhh thank you soo much
May 13, 2017 -
Re: eating bubbles
how is it now?
May 8, 2017 -
Re: eating bubbles
thank you for the review Galaxy! Will definitely take your suggestions into action
May 8, 2017 -
Re: eating bubbles
the narrator is a teenager and the lowercase shows the sadness and how the narrator is too sad/lazy to even correct her work with capitalization, even so, it was a ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: primadonna girl
thank you!
May 1, 2017 -
Re: primadonna girl
thank you!
May 1, 2017 -
Re: primadonna girl
thank you Lumi for the review!
May 1, 2017 -
Re: Hopeful Garden (a year after I Planted a Seed)
this deserves more likes asap. It is a beautiful thing to show improvement and show your growth, and it is an even more beautiful thing to show in the wonderful ...
Apr 11, 2017 -
Re: Mother
thank you
Apr 6, 2017 -
Re: Mother
thank you
Apr 6, 2017
