RoseTulipLily

Thanks for the reviews. I'll work on the revision for this. I also posted another chapter for this called Chapter 2:Kristopher so feel free to review that too

I don't really have any ideas for part two. Sorry. I think you should post what you already have. It not uncommon for writers to feel their work is inadequate ...

Thank you for the review :)

Greetings! Let's get right into the review! Criticism: “I did hear,” he father said. His voice had turned stern. “It’s a fairytale, Kadence. Don’t waste your time on it.” For ...

Thanks for the review ;)

Thanks for the review. I am a catholic school student so that is kinda why I very briefly included religion, but you still make a good point about that part.

Thanks for the review! I'll definitely keep your advice in mind

Thanks so much I'll fix that error

Thanks for the review. I'll definitely keep your advice in mind :)

You're welcome

It's okay, :) thanks for reviewing again

Thanks for the review. Let me make one thing clear first though: it is stated several times by the narrator that she (a girl, yes) cannot and does not hate ...

Thank you!

Thank you very much. I will definitely follow your advice :)

Thank you very much. I appreciate your critiques and will keep them in mind. :) And same to you