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Re: Rose
Sorry, I tried to indent this but it just wouldn't work.
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Detective Manpuddin on "The Explosive Tomato"
Omygosh this is adorable! I actually really quite enjoyed this! Besides a few grammatical and spelling errors this was done quite well. Your brother really does need to keep writing!
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: Virtues of the Damned
This is beautiful. I love it! That is all I have to say.
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: I am an Alien
It's very different I have to say but interesting. Kind of jumbled together so it can be hard to understand, but it's a good start. I would say keep working ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: To Live is to Die
The poem is really cool. I like how it's deceptivley discriptive and makes you feel like your the narrator floating about looking at the burning world having this epiphany.
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: When the Clouds Pour out
WOW! This is really good! I wish you could've extended it and added a little more. But overall I really don't have much to say. The beginning was specatacular I ...
Nov 13, 2010 -
Re: The Cost
Thank you for all your comments. I will be sure to remember them when next I post/write.
Nov 9, 2010