Rook

You used all these words in such a competent, concrete way. The images are just astounding, and I love the clever title. This was a very sad poem addressing a ...

Hello! I'm (finally) reviewing one of your poems! :) I really like this. I'm going to assume that the walls you are referring to are the figurative walls of you ...

Heya! First, since these are lyrics, no suggestions can make a piece better than music that actually fits what you're talking about and the words. It doesn't really matter how ...

I swear I reviewed this. I guess I didn't. This was a lovely poem, and I especially like the title, which drew me into it. I'm afraid that I'm not ...

Ladies and gentlemen, she's done it again! :D I think this is my favorite poem of yours yet. I found myself holding my breath as the emotion peaked, all the ...

Hello! I haven't seen to many acrostic poems on here, so it was nice to see a change. I think this has great potential, but I don't think you pulled ...

Hello! First off, the first stanza reminded me of a mix the songs "Love the Way you Lie" by eminem or whoever, and "Radioactive" by Imagine Dragons. That's probably why ...

Hello! As for the lines thing, it's just something that YWS does when you copy/paste stuff. The only way to fix it is to manually go in there and re-space ...

Hello! This was a very unique poem. I'm not quite sure what you were going for here, and I'm not quite sure if you knew either. What do you mean ...

Hello Iggy! I'm finally here with my promised review! :) This was a beautiful, simple, and elegant poem. I love how it is plain and easy to understand. It has ...

Hello! This was actually really impressive! I love how you made it into a shape, and the lines fit the shape really well, and I love how when you reach ...

This was a pretty cute poem. I think you accurately described the magic that is the first snow of the year. There were some really nit-picky things though that make ...

Hello! I'm here for the poetry exchange thingy! This was an interesting poem. I love the tone so much. The short lines were extremely effective, as was the repetition. I'm ...

Hello! This was quite a beautiful poem. I'm curious as to the meaning behind it. Maybe you're touching on loss? Or maybe want for something you can't have? I'm not ...

Hello! Here I am for the poetry exchange! This was a very interesting poem. I'm not quite sure what happened, but I love the symbols involved. So, in my vague, ...