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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Quadratus

    Hello! I'm here again. :) Man these monsters are cool-lookin'. I also tried to translate this word, and it apparently means "the square" in Latin (amongst 19 other translations). The ...

    Jul 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Science Re: smoke from space

    Hello! This was a beautifully described falling star! Beautiful poem. Fantastic work. While this had such nice descriptions and emotions, the entire time I was missing something. I wanted MORE! ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Valus

    Hello Audy! This poem reminded me of nightmares. It might just be that way because chat was talking about it, but I have this little shiver that's running down my ...

    Jul 10, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Literature Re: 1

    Hello! This review may be harsh, so take it with a grain of salt. This was a very simple question displaying an idea that many of us have. In fact, ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: aliens on the moon

    Hello HighTop! Great to see you putting knowledge to good use! :D I thought his was a unique poem. I love the images you use, and the simplicity of your ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title

    HAR HAR STRANGE YOU COMEDIC GENIUS. What is the rhyme pattern here? .-. Anywho. I will attempt to review. (see what I did there eh? eh.) I appreciated your title. ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: LWR Characters: Ledan Frienson

    Hello! I’ve never seen a character profile submitted as a literary work, but I’m thinking it’s not too bad an idea. Then someone can say whether a character is too ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: A tree (3)

    Hello again! Okay, so this one was more... abstract I guess. I feel like a lot of things are repeated in a way that doesn't help the progression. I say, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: A tree (2)

    Hello! Here for the second part. At first I was going to say "why don't you just put them all in one poem?" But now I can see why. It's ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: A tree

    Hello! This was simple and beautiful. The major complaint that I have is that it seems to me that you have two completely different concepts here, and you never have ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'll Take My Vitamin D in a Supplement, Thanks

    Hello! I was drawn to this poem because of its unique title. Good job on that. Also, this reads like a jump rope song, but I suppose that would defeat ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Time would not stop.

    Hello! This was a powerful poem! First of all, I think I touch of formatting. I can see that there might be a reason for not having stanzas, just letting ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: After the weekend:

    Hello! I'd love to help you get better! :D So this was pretty wonderful. I loved the beautiful images, and the little details that you narrowed in on. I like ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: Memorial II: The Third Warrior

    Hello! This was a beautiful memorial day poem. I'm glad you wrote this. You have some very beautiful images, I especially like the images about the woman's gown, and the ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Internal Combustion

    Hello! This poem reminds me a little bit of lyrics. I think it could do well as a song or something. So this poem is filled with both wonderful and ...

    Jun 2, 2014


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