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Re: Quadratus
Hello! I'm here again. :) Man these monsters are cool-lookin'. I also tried to translate this word, and it apparently means "the square" in Latin (amongst 19 other translations). The ...
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: smoke from space
Hello! This was a beautifully described falling star! Beautiful poem. Fantastic work. While this had such nice descriptions and emotions, the entire time I was missing something. I wanted MORE! ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Valus
Hello Audy! This poem reminded me of nightmares. It might just be that way because chat was talking about it, but I have this little shiver that's running down my ...
Jul 10, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hello! This review may be harsh, so take it with a grain of salt. This was a very simple question displaying an idea that many of us have. In fact, ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: aliens on the moon
Hello HighTop! Great to see you putting knowledge to good use! :D I thought his was a unique poem. I love the images you use, and the simplicity of your ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Making Words Rhyme Within A Pattern Is Called A Poem, Even When It's Out Of Context And Has A Ridiculously Long Title
HAR HAR STRANGE YOU COMEDIC GENIUS. What is the rhyme pattern here? .-. Anywho. I will attempt to review. (see what I did there eh? eh.) I appreciated your title. ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: LWR Characters: Ledan Frienson
Hello! I’ve never seen a character profile submitted as a literary work, but I’m thinking it’s not too bad an idea. Then someone can say whether a character is too ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: A tree (3)
Hello again! Okay, so this one was more... abstract I guess. I feel like a lot of things are repeated in a way that doesn't help the progression. I say, ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: A tree (2)
Hello! Here for the second part. At first I was going to say "why don't you just put them all in one poem?" But now I can see why. It's ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: A tree
Hello! This was simple and beautiful. The major complaint that I have is that it seems to me that you have two completely different concepts here, and you never have ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: I'll Take My Vitamin D in a Supplement, Thanks
Hello! I was drawn to this poem because of its unique title. Good job on that. Also, this reads like a jump rope song, but I suppose that would defeat ...
Jun 20, 2014 -
Re: Time would not stop.
Hello! This was a powerful poem! First of all, I think I touch of formatting. I can see that there might be a reason for not having stanzas, just letting ...
Jun 7, 2014 -
Re: After the weekend:
Hello! I'd love to help you get better! :D So this was pretty wonderful. I loved the beautiful images, and the little details that you narrowed in on. I like ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Memorial II: The Third Warrior
Hello! This was a beautiful memorial day poem. I'm glad you wrote this. You have some very beautiful images, I especially like the images about the woman's gown, and the ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: My Internal Combustion
Hello! This poem reminds me a little bit of lyrics. I think it could do well as a song or something. So this poem is filled with both wonderful and ...
Jun 2, 2014
