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Hello! This hasn't been touched in a while. I think this has... appeal to certain types of people. But for me, it's just not doing it. To me, it sounds ...

Heya mark! So first, some very nit-picky stuff that still detracts from your poem as a whole: it's frigid embrace, should be its, if I'm not mistaken. It is and ...

Hello! Interesting poem, and sassy too! I love sassy poems. Random side note before I get started: the shape of your poem reminds me of a spade (as in the ...

Hello! Very interesting poem you have here. I really like how it started out-- it caught my attention quite well. That said, there are some things that could be improved. ...

Hey! I'm surprised you haven't gotten any reviews on this. I thought it was pretty good. I've tried my hand at these "now read it backwards" poems, and I always ...

Hello! I'd like to tell you that I did not listen to the music, and I'm sorry, because I know that's what you intended it to be for. I'm usually ...

Hi~ Let me review the individual poems separately, and then together as a group. Glass Bottle: This was gorgeous. I swear I say that to every one of your poems, ...

Hey. I've seen a lot of poetry addressed to fathers and/or mothers, and it never ceases to amaze me how different most of them are. They must all be a ...

Hi anci! I love your lyrics. Mmm they send shivers up my spine. My body's aching all the time. MAMAAAA ooohh~♫ owait. That's not right. Anyway, this was a really ...

Yo. Here to cash in on that review. I tend to be more honest/harsh when I give reviews from my WRFF thread, so take this with a pinch of salt. ...

Hello! I can tell this is a very personal poem, and I hurt a bit through this, which is always a good thing. That said, I think that you have ...

Hello! I understand that this was a 5 minute poem, but I'll review it like you spent your entire life on it, kay? ^-^ So, the title is very exact. ...

Hey pomp~ Long time, no review (I think). I apologize for any circuitousness that this has. It's getting late >.> What immediately attracted me to this was the title. Because-- ...

Heyo! I love twisted nursery rhymes. They seem to muffle an echoing void in me just a little-- you know the one that goes "this song, at a drop of ...

Yo cog! I can't pretend that I even quarter-ways understand this story, but I've gotta save you from the wretched clutches of the green room. So, what I gather from ...