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RokitaVivi

  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: The Comedi-hen

    Your chicken poetry is so fun, I almost want to read it again. The poem is very playful in playing with the format and puns. I love the chicken puns ...

    Feb 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Humor, Satire Re: Short horror sentences (for people with long hair)

    Right off the bat this story had me giggling at every sentence, its just funny from beginning to end XD. As a person who use to have long hair (I ...

    Feb 2, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Lilac Hairpin

    I want to say this right off the bat, your poem was pretty good. It flows pretty smoothly, even when I read them aloud. Honestly until the end, I thought ...

    Jan 31, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The accidental magic: chapter one

    So starting this off with some parts I liked about this story, or I guess chapter one. The story gets going doesn't slow down or skip any beats. Basically your ...

    Jan 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: WHAT is youth ?

    Your poem was interesting to read, while at the same time I felt that "oh god, I felt this way" and being too real of a feeling for me right ...

    Jan 24, 2023
  • Article / Essay » Satire, Humor Re: Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer Makes No Sense if You Think About It

    Okay this essay was funny to read, I ended up chuckling through the entire thing while agreeing with some of the points along the way. Like the Hermey becoming a ...

    Jan 20, 2023


That there's some good in this world, Mr Frodo - and it's worth fighting for.
— Samwise Gamgee