Rocksmith

Hey there FlamingPhoenix, Well what can I say? I'm so honoured to have recieved such praise from you. I put a lot of work into this and it's all the ...

Hi there, Thanks for taking the time to leave your opinion on my piece. To answer your first question, the poem came first. The image displayed is the closest match ...

Hi there, This is very beautiful. The title captivated me immediately! I have a few corrections: Not happy anymore, dont want anything, go way. Don't should be apostrophized (just made ...

Thanks alot for the comment :) I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I do agree that it could flow better towards the end, maybe from the second half. When I ...

I'm really glad you guys like my poem :) It's really pleasing that the description and mood came off well. I will work on the flow of the poem and ...

I swear. I wouldn't get by without a dictionary most days haha. Thanks for the heads-up and I'm glad you like the poem :)

Hey justagirl, Thanks for your comment :) I've gotta apologise for the fact that i just slapped this onto the forum right from notepad lol. I usually would have added ...

Haha. Thankyou for your kind comments :) I could not have asked for anything more than to inspire someone else to write something of their own. If you are ever ...

All in good time my friend :D In the meantime, check out some connected work: 'The scions of might'. Salion is in fact an aspiring blademaster ;) Theres a little ...

I have completely removed brombil from the picture as he seems to cause confusion haha. I have taken onboard much advice and reduced gaps between paragraphs, made the sentences more ...

title unknown until somebody helps me out to find one Almost forgot one of the main points of your post :) here is an it seems your characters have kinds ...

lol you're in luck considering I watched the first Lord of the Rings last night. It was incredibly boring, and the CGI was terrible compared to today's standard, but it ...

Thanks for the review. I have to be honest here and say I haven't read the rules of this forum as of yet, but when i get some time I ...

All comments welcome :) *bump*