Rocklobster

Thank you soo much! I entered it for a contest at my schoool, I'm really hoping I win! :) Thanks again!

This poem is awesome. I love it so much! It's adorable and romantic and clever. And it rhymes without even having to force it or anything, good job!

Woah. This is deep. And amaaaaaazing. Very good. Great imagrey, I could see the whole thing in my mind, it was amazing. I love poems, and this one especially. Very ...

Very nice. I like the simplicity of it. It was really nice. Is this a novel, or just a poem? I think it could be the beginning (like a prolouge ...

Your eight year old brother wrote this?? If so, he's good. I really liked this, it seemed not to stray too far from Percy Jackson and the Olympians, but it ...

This is FABULOUS. I love Harry Potter, and this is by far the best HP fanfiction I've read so far. It seems so realistic, like this is what really happened ...

Wow. Your really good at describing things. It was like I could see your words in my mind. I really liked that, it was very interesting and the end was ...

Hey guys, thanks so much for your comments. You asked about the formatting, and I did it that way because that's how things look when I think them up in ...

I really enjoyed this story. It was fun to read, and I didn't want to stop. I hope there's more coming. I don't really have much critism, because it was ...

So, I was just painting my nails last night and the exact same stuff happened...I like this. It's funny and very entertaining. I enjoyed it. So yes.

Good poem! The title confused me at first because of the TV show Dancing with the Stars, but I know you didn't mean it like that, so it's okay. I ...

I really like this. It's funny, relatable, and very clever. I think the way you wrote this is very realistic, and reminds me of the way I sometimes like to ...

i thought that poem was really good. fun to read. plus, i loved the title. "like string cheese" i may not know what that poem was about in your mind, ...

woah. i'm not very good at explaining why i like things, so i'm just gonna let you know i really liked this. the words just made me feel so warm ...