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Re: Right
Just a note, for some reason, these stanzas are not spaced out. They should be. So please don't say, "why didn't you break up the lines?" I do not know ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Not my Own Chapter 1
That was very good! I like the way the mother, an ex supermodel, was portrayed. She's a stepmom, right? Very realitic characters, keep it up! ~Rocking Writer~
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Imperfection
AN Just a note. These are supposed to be spaced out stanzas, sorry!
Nov 1, 2009 -
Re: Heartbreak
Very well written! *Applause* I loved the part about the hourglass being glued down. Beautiful. I love this poem! ~Rocking Writer~ :D
Oct 25, 2009
