RockingWriter

Hi there! Let's see, your poem... Maybe seperate some things, they're kind of in a big blob. I liked the poem but since it's about a certain person, I feel ...

This was a very good poem that captures many feelings. The emotions were good, you just need to check your spelling and punctuation. I especially like the part about being ...

I really liked it! It was an interesting way to think of this simple object. Only thing that I would change is grammer. A few of the 'its' needed apostrophes, ...