RituparnaBhowmik

hearty thanks for the review. i have uses has with a capital "H" as it is the starting word of the line, i simply maintained this scheme throughout if you ...

thank you for this review. and i would like to clarify that life is compared to a heap of sand simply due to its ever changing nature, its never stagnant ...

actually plight is fate in literal sense- at least i meant it in that sense here. the person is actually broken and is crying , however no one is paying ...

really good work any anyway the spaces are not that necessary. music is really in my soul too but i have a doubt that why were your parents against it. ...

okay i get it now. i am not accustomed to Wallace Steven i would like to read of him henceforth

thank you for your review and i made some amendments in the grounds you suggested, your suggestions really helped me in the course. please do read my words and give ...

i owe you a hearty thanks for this review and i would certainly work on my weak ground. as for the language- my approach is quite older as i want ...

thank you for this review and for the suggestions. and yes i know some similes are vague i am working on them. by hearth i mean the warmth and ever ...

thank you so much. i finally found a place to expose my thoughts before all and i would certainly try to make the best use of it. thank you for ...

a lot of thanks for spending some time to review my work. i am merely an amateur so i am finding difficult to deal with a few problems. and yes ...

Cute poem but at points i find it difficult to understand what is your theme... like are you really dead as you said yous eyes are waiting or has she ...