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actually i myself was a bit worked out while writing this so may be that affected my work, however the lyrical scheme has a significance- in the 1st half the ...

actually i myself was a bit worked out while writing this so may be that affected my work, however the lyrical scheme has a significance- in the 1st half the ...

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thank you so much for this appreciation... i would try to keep up to the expectation as i write more... :D

this review was really a help and i thank you for that i did change the hurdle to hurdles and i fell its more appropriate but for changing the last ...

thank you for the appreciation and actually i call the unknown land well known to give it a literary tough, the phrase means that you can explore the unknown land ...

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i think you have got that fever on you. actually you see zindagi is a definition that a person writes with their own view but often they match

yep it resembles...

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that was kind of you to suggest me with grounds for improvement. and yes i read quite a few poetry so perhaps my writing had been unknowingly affected by a ...

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thank you ... and thanks a lot.. i really learned from your pickings and i think i am doing justice to it now.

i have done some editing and i too felt that the repetition was a bit monotonous, however through the changing scenes i am also symbolizing the ever changing moods. its ...

I think the new changes suits better.. what do you feel about them?