Ritaki

Oh dear....hahahah! Simply hilarious.

How absolutely adorable! Very lovely poem. My only critique would be just small issues with the rhythm...Love it!

This is brilliant! I tried to search for something to critique but I just couldn't come up with anything negative. I love it. I felt like I was tumbling down ...

Woops! I wrote this quite a while ago and posted the unedited version! Thank you for pointing those out :) Made the changes...

I was just a tinsy bit creeped out when I first started reading this..but continued anyways and it was worth it! I had a good laugh :P Very clever!

For some reason when I read this poem I was reminded a little of Shel Silverstein...perhaps because of its magical quality. Very enjoyable read!

First of all, I'd like to say I know where you're coming from and I find this very amiable. Though, it was a bit bumpy at times in terms of ...

Quite original & deviously humorous! My crush eats my homework every single day....