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Re: those sweet mormon girls
Goodness. This poem touched me deeply. I can't express how wonderful it is to see something on the internet that doesn't degrade my religion. Just... thank you. Thank you so ...
May 31, 2017 -
Re: prologue
My pleasure! :D
May 11, 2017 -
Re: eggshells
Thank you for the review! I'll try to use your critique well. :D
Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: eggshells
Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work! I'll definitely use your critiques to improve it. :D You're right; the second stanza ought to be more ...
Apr 10, 2017 -
Re: naïveté
Thank you so much for taking the time to review it! :D I completely agree, I seem to have difficulty wrapping up poetry. Your review was super helpful. :)
Apr 7, 2017 -
Re: naïveté
Fixed! Review away. :D
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: naïveté
Once again, I'll fix the formatting in the morning. Wait until then to review it.
Apr 3, 2017 -
Re: perspective shift
Thank you so much for the review. :D I would agree about the context. It's an easy hole to fall into with this project, as I'm writing based on my ...
Mar 27, 2017 -
Re: perspective shift
All fixed now! Review away. :D
Mar 20, 2017 -
Re: the camera
The LMS requirements are not that extensive, thank goodness. :) I'll try to improve that stanza. Thanks for reviewing it!
Mar 3, 2017 -
Re: Fur Feathers Scales and Stars - 2.5
Yep. Sorry for the confusion.
Feb 27, 2017 -
Re: the lantern
You're right, all lowercase works a lot better. Thanks again!
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: the parades
Thank you for the review! I'm glad the feeling of being at the parade got through. :D
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: the parades
Thank you so much for reviewing my poem. :D I really appreciate it.
Feb 26, 2017 -
Re: the lantern
Thank you so much for reviewing my work! I've gone back and made a few changes based on what you said. A lot of the things that seem odd are ...
Feb 18, 2017
