RippleGylf

Very informative, and overall well-written. I'm impressed, as this is far better than most of the MLA essays I've written. One thing that seemed odd was this paragraph: Additive Manufacturing ...

I absolutely love this poem. Very true. So, I'm currently confused by the punctuation, especially the parentheses. Why are they not closed, and is it purposeful? If it is intended ...

Overall, just a very well-written piece. I absolutely loved it! You create such an intriguing world in this prologue that I can't wait to read the rest of it. This ...

Short, concise, and beautiful. :) Just reading it, I can empathize with the whole thing. It leaves an impression of captivity and struggle. The "threes" at the beginning are a ...

Very beautiful and picturesque. I think it perfectly captures a lazy summer night. The imagery is breathtaking. I know I love seeing the silhouettes of trees on a dusk/dawn sky, ...

Wow. This is a somewhat cold-hearted poem, but I can definitely relate to that frustration towards the world. The second to last stanza is my favorite, with that imagery and ...

Interesting... And very well written. :) I can understand why she doesn't mention the mummy PI, (with her rocky relationship with Mom, obviously she is not going to say, "Mom, ...

Very nice. :) The first paragraph really caught my eye as being very well written. A few proof-reading issues, such as spaces in "homo_sapiens" and "life_is", but overall very good. ...

This left me very confused. Based on the title and description, I was expecting the epic story of Meow Meow Cat... and this does not seem like that at all. ...

I think this really captured the essence of dreams. There are a few problems with wording at times, such as: But it is harmful too, Top those who seek it ...

I just have to say, I absolutely love this piece. Sure, the twist at the end felt a bit arbitrary, but everything leading up to that was wonderful. I guess ...

This seems to be an interesting mix between free verse and short story. It is not exactly either, but it is really gripping regardless. I don't know if you are ...

I really liked this poem. Beautifully short, in my opinion. There are some formatting issues, but that's probably due to technical difficulties, I'm guessing. I assume the desired form of ...

This is a very, very well-written poem. I don't think there is much that I can point out as being wrong. The only possible thing I could think of is ...

I like the idea behind this piece, but the saying you repeat throughout seems unintelligible until, of course, the final paragraph. It also is only one letter off of "Anything ...