Riedawriter23

This was awesome! I felt like I was there quite literally. I'm beggining to think you're a professional Incan. lol. Great job on detail and character developement.

This was a funny little poem, It made me laugh and that makes it good!

This was great. There's suspence around every corner and I have to keep reading to have almost every important question I have answered. You're really talented at leading your readers ...

I really liked this one as well. I was glad the characters actually met each other and I love the sense of humour that Jon took on in the beggining. ...

I enjoyed this just as well as the first actually. Well done. You introduced your characters very well.

Wow that was great! I felt like I was reading a real novel and you did absolutely excellent. I can't wait to read more. A poet in author's clothes? I ...